With all the respect to Ghalib Sahab..

Two of my friends were discussing Ghalib Sahab ki shayari.. discussion kuch zyada serious ho raha tha to humne kuch contribute kar diya..

Tadpana to teri fitrat mein likha hai zaalim..
Ghalib.. jo guzar gaya.. use bhulaane ki gunjaish nahin..
aur jo tere paas hai.. unhe yaad rakhne ki teri koi khwaish nahin.

Kuch aur discussions ke baad reply mein Ghalib Sahab ki ye pankityaan ayi:

Baazeecha-e-atfaal hai duniya mere aage..
hota hai shab-o-roz tamaasha mere aage.

Phir humne Ghalib Sahab ki in panktiyon ka jawab kuch aisa diya:

Baazeecha-e-atfaal hai duniya Tere aage..
hota hai shab-o-roz tamaasha Tere aage.
Aur kya kahen teri shaan mein ab hum..
har Tareef padti hai Bahut kam Tere aage!!

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