Zindagi ke har mod par.. naye rishte ban jaate hain,
kuch pal do pal ke.. to kuch khud se bhi aziz ho jaate hain.
Nahin thakti yeh aankhen.. teri rah takte takte,
tumse milne ke ehsaas mein har dard bhool jaate hain.
Nahin bhoolti teri kahi koi bhi baat,
teri baatein yaad kar.. yeh lab.. tanhai mein bhi muskura jaate hain.
Kabhi kabhi is dil ko.. hoti hai kuch shikayat us khuda se,
par tumhe apni zindagi mein dekh.. sab shikwe door ho jaate hain.
Zindagi ke har mod par.. naye rishte ban jaate hain,
kuch bus pal bhar ke.. to kuch umar bhar ka saath ban jaate hain.
Apr 27, 2008 at 9:06 am
Bura na manna, kafi accha likha hai, lakin aap do line ke char line bana de to ye kavita padhne main aur bhi achhi lagegi.
… Likhte rahna …!!
Apr 27, 2008 at 6:27 pm
I will try to add some more lines to it… but I myself don’t like poetry that is too long..
Apr 28, 2008 at 6:51 am
I don’t mean add lines to it … its perfect … may be just break the lines. … the beauty of poetry is in short lines.
Jul 10, 2008 at 11:27 pm
HELLO FRND,
VERY NICE SHAYARI
Jul 11, 2008 at 10:22 am
Thanks a lot Pankaj.. keep visiting.
Dec 9, 2008 at 1:05 am
Hi Frnd..
G8t Shayri..!!
kuch pal zindgi ke likha diye apne to is shayari me g8t. hum bhi kuch likhe apki shayri ke liye..
Apki nazron se jannat ka nazara tha,
Koi shakhs itna pyar tha,
Kisi ne pucha humse kamyabi ki sidi pe pahuchne ka
sabab bade fakr se hum bole ki nahi,
pahucne is kamyabi pe hum tanha,
ek kadam apka aur ek kadam humare tha,,,
God Bless u.
byeeeee